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You remind me of a china doll
A beautiful thing in an ugly place
So delicate and small
You belong in a glass case

Skin untainted
From this filthy world
Soul Sainted
And true beauty is unfurled

You should be put up for display
Untouched by the filthy hands
And there you shall stay
I just hope you can understand

I wanted to keep you forever
But I should have known better
©2006-2009 ~DepressedXGoldfish
:icondepressedxgoldfish:

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Well this is another poem from my project.
It's a sonnet, and it had to be about someone we love and compare them to something...
So I decided to dedicate this poem to My china doll.
I'm sorry that this is a lame poem but I tried my best
and I'm sorry to all my other friends who I didn't write poems to...I'm getting there...slowly ^^;
Enjoy.

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:iconshortpinay:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :excited:

That's such a pretty poem.. ♥ I never thought that anybody would ever write a poem dedicated to me TwT AWWW! I'm so happy :boogie:

I love you so much!!! ♥ Thank you!!!! You make me feel so special X3

:glomp:

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"You.. remarkably made it rain.. of blood." -Tomoe
:icondepressedxgoldfish:
No, thank you for being my inspiration for this poem :heart:
:glomp:

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I'm Not The Same Ghost I Was Before
But I Still Converse With The Spirits
When People Talk I Don't Hear It
I Walk Through Doors When No One Sees Me
I Disappear, I Disappear, Disappear
Whenever It May Please Me
:iconsuchiru:
XD Ah, that's a cool poem~! And it's devoted to shorty? Aww, how sweet~ ^.^

It's a nice poem~ I like it. ^.^ And it rhymes too XD cool~

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Back to DA but not with a vengence
:iconsirenlovesyou:
This is so pretty TT_TT I waaaana draw a pic about this noooow. Do you mind at all?

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Intimacy is a four-syllable word for "Here's my heart and soul. Please grind them into hamburger and enjoy".

Princess Brat Siren-chan "Still looking for my prince":star:
:icondepressedxgoldfish:
Why thank you.
I'm surprised it would inspire anyone, but if you feel like drawing it go ahead. I won't stop you xD
<3

--
I'm Not The Same Ghost I Was Before
But I Still Converse With The Spirits
When People Talk I Don't Hear It
I Walk Through Doors When No One Sees Me
I Disappear, I Disappear, Disappear
Whenever It May Please Me
:iconsirenlovesyou:
It was a beautiful poem though :heart: Wonderful job on it. :heart::heart: Would you like the link of the picture when I have finish with it?

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Intimacy is a four-syllable word for "Here's my heart and soul. Please grind them into hamburger and enjoy".

Princess Brat Siren-chan "Still looking for my prince":star:
:icondepressedxgoldfish:
Thank you.
Sure, that will be cool ;D

--
I'm Not The Same Ghost I Was Before
But I Still Converse With The Spirits
When People Talk I Don't Hear It
I Walk Through Doors When No One Sees Me
I Disappear, I Disappear, Disappear
Whenever It May Please Me
:iconsirenlovesyou:
[link]
Heeeere is the piccie ^o^ :heart:

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Intimacy is a four-syllable word for "Here's my heart and soul. Please grind them into hamburger and enjoy".

Princess Brat Siren-chan "Still looking for my prince":star:

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